This is really great, I love her expression, and I absolutely loved this character! It's very odd how you shaded, but somehow I feel it works with this piece. It could be better in some spots, it's conflicting that the clothing has soft shading gradients but not her skin. But like I said, I'm not saying it's bad. :3 Also, I really like how you made the lines where the garter belt (I think that's what it's called?) to show that one is pulling more than the other. But realistically, I think it should be the other side (her left) that should be more taut. Reason being, if her right leg is up towards her more, it would be pulling less tight than the left side. I might be wrong though, so sorry in advance. :3 I really like this piece though, keep up the good work! You should be happy with this work, I think it shows a lot of improvement!