DreamingWooper's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[LOL - Jinx]

I love Jinx, but I gotta say I like her with small boobs like her character design. Very nice though, you handled the braids very well! I don't know if it's a stylistic choice (if it is, ignore this) but you might want to consider going easy on the sharpness of the shadows of her nip nacks, it makes it look like she has smarties candies taped to her boobs. But other than that, her boobs look great. :3 Nice job!

CherryLolo responds:

Thank you :) I'll consider that the next time

[Homs]

I'm not entirely sure the style you're going for so it's hard for me to critique, but anyways. XD
I'll be honest it looks like a WIP, but you don't mention that so I'm assuming it's not. I'm a little confused as to why the blue guy's hair has no shading? But basically this could be a good piece but it doesn't seem like it was worked on enough. Do you use a tablet? What programs do you use? Your linework could use a little more practice, it's very sketchy which looks ok in some parts, I get that can be a style, but it just looks like you were cutting corners and not taking your time in some places. The blue guy's anatomy seems a little weird, his mouth looks a little like it's on the side of his face. I like the way you made them different colors, and how the blush is the other guy's color, I thought that was a cute touch. Overall it's very cute :3 I think it's a good start, but I would consider just taking more time and working on the piece a little longer.

ZaneMudfish responds:

Thank you so much. I'll take that into consideration.

[Rin Tetsuka]

I remember this game. :3 This is from Katawa Shoujo, right? (If not, sorry XD )
Nice work though, good perspective and shading. :3

sahara-atagi responds:

It is from Katawa Shoujo~~She was kinda hard to get the good ending though...(Thank you~)

[Final Fantasy Lesson 2.03]

omg yes. Just yes.

HenLP responds:

Thanks. x)

[Saeko]

This is really great, I love her expression, and I absolutely loved this character! It's very odd how you shaded, but somehow I feel it works with this piece. It could be better in some spots, it's conflicting that the clothing has soft shading gradients but not her skin. But like I said, I'm not saying it's bad. :3 Also, I really like how you made the lines where the garter belt (I think that's what it's called?) to show that one is pulling more than the other. But realistically, I think it should be the other side (her left) that should be more taut. Reason being, if her right leg is up towards her more, it would be pulling less tight than the left side. I might be wrong though, so sorry in advance. :3 I really like this piece though, keep up the good work! You should be happy with this work, I think it shows a lot of improvement!

Rennis5 responds:

Thank you :D
I'm pretty sure i'll draw her again, she's worth it,
as for the garter thing you mentioned i think i got the idea from a photo i seen, i'm not 100% sure (i actually made this a few weeks ago)
I already know i can paint skin better than this but i'd like to have a go at drawing the hair a bit better too.
Thank you for rating and commenting on my artwork, i hope you check out some of the artwork I upload over the next few weeks, i think you'll be impressed :D

[MR WABBIT]

I just love your style so much! Ah! owo

AkiCarlito responds:

thanks!!! <3

[Pokegirls 2]

Your art is very well done, your anatomy is pretty well planned out too. But wow the comment under mine is a bit... well I guess that's the type of people that go on this site. Anyways, keep up the good work. :3

ChrisArmin responds:

thanks a bunch

[Paint'o Gurrrl]

Overall wonderful job, this is STUNNING, from the artistic design of the dress to the freckles! The dress has odd spots that are very clear cut that you've made work for you even though the rest of the piece is very smooth! Which is pretty difficult, you've got a lot of talent! The neck could use a little more definition, it's not too thick, it just looks a little tube-like because you can't see the tendons. And her arm looks tube-like too, and maybe a little skinny and also lacking some definition. But her eyes are so sparkley and beautiful! As well, her hair is very well done, I really want to touch it. It looks so soft. uwu

AkiCarlito responds:

thanks a whole bunch! and the tips are really really helpful! Thank youuu!!

[Scary Luigi]

omg no I'm going to have nightmares (but good job XD)

MofetaFanBoyNG responds:

Thanks.